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Broken hearts
On an autumns day,
My dear Yukio
Has gone away.

With tears unseen
And emotions unfelt,
Hope has faded
And the pain has dealt.

Like a wilting rose
Day by day,
Each petal fell
Slowly fading away.

When the news passed
My blood froze,
And my heart bled
For the death of a rose.
©2008-2009 !XxFirexWolfxX
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Aww..Thats so sad..
I like how you portrayed the emotion in this poem=3 You did a very nice work:D
:aww: thanks :D and thanks for the :+fav: :hug:
I think.....I was there to support you..? At least I hope I was...
and yes that was a very deeply emotional poem =)

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King_ 知識_θάρρος_Vires™
yes you were :D his loss still hurt though....but i have accepted his death and am no longer in mourning ^^

thank you for being there :hug:
Of course :hug: and I understand :nod:

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King_ 知識_θάρρος_Vires™
Very moving again :tears:

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They took gullible out of the dictionary :O

Suddenly throwing a giraffe into a volcano to make water is crazy!
:hug:

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They took gullible out of the dictionary :O

Suddenly throwing a giraffe into a volcano to make water is crazy!

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